Lady Alexa
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Becoming Joanne 2: Deepening his feminization and… von Lady Alexa
Seems like it's customary of Lady Alexa to write great stories and then stretch those with poor second parts. Part 1 of Becoming Joanne was a great Femdom Forced-Feminization, with only weakness that it had abrupt ending. Hence, there was great potential that the main story could progress well in the second part. Sadly, this part seems like it's written by an entirely different person. Because there are only scenes like smuts, and the flow to the main storyline has completely halted.
Pretty bad, especially after an awesome Part 1. The main story progressed at such an ultra-slow pace that it became boring only after a few chapters. There were not much direct interaction between the two main characters that was kind of irritating at times. Honestly, if compressed this part properly, only a few chapters would have been added to the first part to make that part even better. This seconds part is forcefully written to stretch the story unnecessarily.
Lady Alexa has written several Femdom Forced-Feminization Erotica masterpieces. This is surely not one of those. In fact, it seems like work of an amateurish writer trying to play smart. There are kind of two halves of the story, and both are handled extremely bad. First half is trying to build character with telling us how dominant the main character is, what she has achieved, with skipping almost everything how she did that. Small scene of her young-age is brief and uninteresting. Then comes a second character who would be feminized. And I can't even say how badly that feminization is handled. Two days of buildup, then comes a 'Six months later' thing, and everything goes poof. I will suggest skipping this book and pick up one of the good books written by Lady Alexa.… (mehr)
Although the first part of this book is a Femdom-Forced-Feminization masterpiece, I wouldn't recommend purchasing the whole box set, as all the additions included in this pack are trashy extensions. You can rather purchase the first part only cheaper, and enjoy the best.
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