Miss Melissa A. Joy

Send it back to an editor. There are a LOT of typos and formatting errors. I'm 33% through the book and still lost, though I don't want to be. The story seems to have a lot of potential and should be popular among the Weeabo, Anime, Steam Punk crowd, but I wish Melissa Joy had taken more time to smooth out the introductory portion of the book. The world she has created is obviously well developed, but So much information was presented so quickly, that it became hard to follow. I usually prefer to finish a book before reviewing, but the typos and formatting errors are just too distracting.… (mehr)