Sarah Millward

My fifth story by Sarah Millward. Another story of a older woman being humilated and loving it. And another story where a lot of the stuff is in British and therefore unknown to me.

Curious if 'mutton dressed as a lamb' is a common phrase there. No idea what a banger or slapper might be. 'plastering the slap over my face' . . . you are doing what now? Fanny, bumhole, knickers, arse, hell, I don't even know what a 'city centre pub' might be. Well, no, I assume it's a pub in the centeral part of a city, I just am not sure if that is code for anything more. I get the general idea, though. Well, except for the banger one.

Older woman who dresses up sluttily and gets humiliated. And loves it.

Hmms. Story is much more of a 'remembrances of fond humiliating events of the past which I'll tell you, though with little detail' type of story.

Bah. Diaper scene again. Bah. eww eww eww.

Hmm. This time everything was rather boringly presented. Then some gross stuff added. Drat.… (mehr)

My third story by this author, and this one's super short. Just nine pages. What the heck can happen in nine pages? I look . . .

Okay, let's see. A woman has these "bad thoughts" so drinks. A lot. Goes grocery shopping. Begins sweating. Leaves. hmm hmm . . . tapping fingers, watching story unfold.

Immediately upon arriving at home pulls bottle of vodka that she just bought, and gulps.

Huh. So, woman remembers time went on a date. Spent some time with the guy. Immediately drops him when her son gives her a shirt with the word "slut" on it. Drinks more. Um. What? Drops . . . a guy because son gave her a shirt with slut on it? Shesh.

Tapping fingers, bored like, I am, I mean. Now she is playing with her clit. hmm hmm.

I'm confused. Why would 'having an affair" shock people? If she's not married? Just because she has a kid? I'm confused.

heh. heh. heh. "Then she went to McDonalds. Then she had some food. THen she tried to put ketchup on the fries. Then some salt. Then she ate some food." Shesh. THanks for the minute by minute running commentary. Now she's complaining, to herself, mentally, about how awful the food tastes. Well, she did go to a fast food place.

"Carol walked up to the bar.
‘Hi,’ a young woman said pleasantly.
'Hi, a glass of red wine please.'
'Large or small?'
'Large please.'
The young woman gave her the wine - she paid for it then took a seat in a corner."
(Kindle Location 120).

This is quite riveting. Like . . watching paint dry.

And now she stumbles into an alley, drunk, and gets fucked. By a bunch of guys. Then peed on. Gets up afterwards to look for more to drink. Story over.

Shesh. That was just very depressing. And, to a certain extent, I didn't exactly understand it. If she wanted to fuck, then go fuck. If she wanted to drink, drink. If she wanted to do both, do both. Which she did. Nothing exactly erotic, exciting, or humiliating here. Hell, even the getting peed on, which sure as shit should have been humiliating, was described in such a way as just one of those things.

'The rain was falling. She ate some fries. Went to a bar. Flashed her slutty attaire at some people. One suggested going outside. She shrugged, went outside. Got groped. Got fucked. One after another. Rain fell on her. She blinked. Now they were peeing on her. She blinked. They left. She got up. She went to look for more alcohol. The end.' - I boil the story down to that paragraph. And, roughly, that level of excitement. This happened. Then that. Then that. hmm.… (mehr)

Hmms. Started off interesting enough. Then we got to "splosh" fetish. Not really my thing. Then the star of the story once again lost control of her bladder. blah. eww.

The "being a public live model for a bdsm exhibit" part was interesting, but went a little too far.

The "gangbanged by old fat people" started of like one of those "Public Disgrace" website stories.

bah. more peeing. More . . . whatever it's called when dick in ass, then in mouth with no cleaning in between. eww.

And then it ended abruptly. Seemingly in the middle of a scene. Just . . . space, new paragraph . . "well I learned something . . ." um . . what happened to the rest of the scene? And then . . end of story. hmms. That was . . . really short.… (mehr)

Interesting story of humiliation. A woman at around 40 (though one part says 34) feels lonely, ignored by her kids and husband. Goes online. Learns of various kinks and fetishes. Decides she really wanted to be humliated so she sent out a message to a couple.

Competently written. Well, I assume it is. Some of it was in language I didn't understand, English slang (as in England). Assuming th was used correctly, then competently written. Quite interesting little story arc/or series of scenes.

The ass stuff, piss stuff, and cigarette stuff was quite out of anything I'd want to do willingly. Of which, despite some of the things that occur, Susan's actions were done willingly.

The scene in the pub and the scene in the fetish club would fit in perfectly on that Public Disgrace website.

And then the last paragraph ruined everything. hehe. Ah well.… (mehr)