Sophie Stern

There was zero fluidity. The story was extremely choppy. Tuings had no sense. And with the amount of time harping about masturbation, you would have thought the sex would have been better.
It's like we are plunged into the diary or a character whose story was already on the go.
I hate writing poor reviews but, idk... I read the whole series and idk... just no. I can't support it.

Its ok. Reads more like a short story. Limited backstory. Not much connection. And I dislike the starting with spanking. Ruins the sex for me.

not into the whole choking BS or spanking. Not a bad story.

Not for me at all.