This book was pretty great. I hadn't picked up the DS9 relaunch series in over a year, and chapter 3 did a a great job of catching you up on what the heck has been happening and who all these people are.

Much of the book is focused on the Breen and Starfleet Intelligence's investigation into them. A fascinating "species" that we didn't get nearly enough of on T.V. but that's a perfect reason to get this whole new perspective here. I really hope we get more Breen in the future.

Bashir is re-united with the Jack Pack who convince him to help SFI because Sabrina is there. Hubb-hubba.

I don't give it 5 stars because I felt the sex scenes were unnecessary and Bashir killing people doesn't seem like a correct character. I'm pretty sure my teacher would have assumed I was making stuff up if I wrote a book report. ( )

There's a sort of Cold War analogy implicit in the Typhon Pact: its name derives, if I remember rightly, from the Warsaw Pact, and the Typhon polities are in a sort of Cold War competition with the Khitomer ones (i.e., the Federation and the Klingons). Zero Sum Game is an espionage thriller making use of that background: the Breen have stolen the slipstream drive schematics from Starfleet, hoping to develop a fleet of slipstream vessels for the Pact, and Julian Bashir and Sarina Douglas are assigned to destroy the plans before the prototype is launched. You can imagine this happening in a Tom Clancy novel with, I dunno, cruise missile plans or something.

On one level, this is an espionage thriller, and this is the kind of thing David Mack excels at. His solo Star Trek debut was the action-packed, emotional Wildfire; he followed this up books like the intense Failsafe and the similarly intense A Time to Kill and to Heal. Though I'm sure it's actually no easier than any other kind of writing is, it seems like Mack can shoot these things off in his sleep. Julian and Sarina go undercover, blow up some trains, meet some dissidents, infiltrate some bases, shoot some baddies, fight some torturers, and eventually blow up a ton of shit in an action-packed climax. It's well done and the book moves along quite zippily, and it was ideal reading for an airplane trip.

At the same time, Captain Ezri Dax on the Aventine is playing space chicken with Breen and Romulan forces, trying to stay in position for a slipstream extraction of Julian and Sarina. This is all well and good, though I find the personalities of the non-Ezri Aventine crew to range from "present" to "still there."

On another level, this is an exploration of the Breen, a Star Trek race that our knowledge of comes from a lot of random tidbits that don't entirely add up. The way Mack sews them all together is quite ingenious, making the Breen culture an amalgam of different species, enforcing a lack of prejudice by suits that ensure the true species of any given Breen is known only to themself. Thus the inconsistent information about the Breen is explained as encounters with different species. It's a really interesting idea, a sort of warped mirror of the Federation's equality as well as a take on Vonnegut's "Harrison Bergeron."

Unfortunately, the novel doesn't really do anything with it, except that the suits provide a convenient way for Julian and Sarina to sneak into Breen society undetected. I can imagine a novel that uses espionage and infiltration to explore an alien society (The Romulan Way kind of does this), but Zero Sum Game isn't it. We only meet two types of Breen here: dissidents who don't like the enforced equality, and nasty bad guys. (Well, plus a kind of nice engineer, but he's pretty pointless.) What is life like in Breen society? We have no sense of it, there's no real worldbuilding at all, and that seems like a shame and a huge missed opportunity. There's a scene where Julian and Douglas hang out in a market for hours, but we're told all they see is "mundane interactions." Given how different kinds of "markets" (say) an American shopping mall and a South African flea market are, to gloss over this is one of many missed opportunities when it comes to exploring Breen culture.

Especially as this concept makes the Breen more Federation-esque than you might expect, but in a different way. Seeing a "true believer" of the Breen way of life could have really expanded our understanding of their society. The non-dissident Breen are filled with hate for the Federation, but imagine them as more rueful over the Federation's misguided attempts at "equality." Also you might argue that Breen culture would appeal to Julian Bashir; one of Julian's throughlines in the novel (about which I'll say more in a moment) is that Sarina is a rare person who he feels like he fits with. Thus it seems to me there's potential in a Breen-style society for Julian, where one is judged on accomplishments, not background, as was true for Bashir up until he was revealed as genetically engineered. Would the "masking" of the Breen be a release for someone like him? I hope that future Destiny-era novels do more with the Breen culture Mack set up here, because it's a great idea with a lot of potential.

Finally, the character throughline of Julian didn't work for me. The narrative keeps telling us he's in love with Sarina, but it's not really shown. I felt like there was a missed opportunity in the action scenes to show Julian and Sarina as matched and compatible, as the only people able to keep up with each other, which would sell the reader on what Julian keeps saying about how Sarina is the only person operating on his level. Instead it seems like Julian just follows Sarina around and acts aghast at her decisions a lot, interrupted by occasional scenes where they flirt and/or have sex. Having them be on the same page for most of the novel would also make Sarina's decision to abandon the Breen dissidents more shocking; as it is, Julian comes across as naïve for being surprised by it given Sarina's attitudes throughout the novel. The novel is clearly setting up a long-term fall of some sort for Julian, though, and I'm interested in seeing where things go from here.

So, overall I would say this was a highly enjoyable thriller-- but it felt like it could have been a highly enjoyable thriller and an exploration of an alien culture and a stronger exploration of Julian Bashir himself.

Continuity Notes:

• It turns out Ro Laren is in command of Deep Space 9 now, which seems to have potential. I wonder how it will be handled going forward.

Other Notes:

• I didn't really care for the scene of Ezri and Julian arguing. Seemed improbably immature, especially when Julian storms off.
• This book also highlights a problem in the Destiny era that dates back to A Time for War, A Time for Peace and Articles of the Federation: I really do think 24th-century Federation politics were better left off screen most of the time. They're just so mundane and contemporary. On the other hand, I do like President Bacco and love Esperanza Piñiero, so who knows.

The A story was pretty good, Bashir/Sarina, but the B story of Dax on the Aventine was just cringeworthy. Gives me concerns for the series because I think she is in a lot of them? Although I don't necessarily think it was the character as much as how poorly she was written. On the bridge in an emergency she actually says to one of her crew "Thanks for stating the obvious." Really? So bad.

But learning more about Breen society was fascinating, I really enjoyed those parts. ( )

The typhoon pact is working on desigNing a slip drive prototype and it's up to Bashir and Dax to stop it. A good read. ( )

Action, adventure... and one or two small things.

Whenever an author writes for the pocketbook Star Trek novels, I'm certain there's an awful lot of incidental information that they need to ensure that the reader knows and understands - things that they didn't necessarily write, or at least not in this particular book, but do they really have to infodump? That kind of thing is beneath an author of Alan Mack's caliber, and this, along with his making Bashir far more stupid than his genetic enhancements allow were my two main problems with the first part of this series.

Otherwise the book is action packed, and carries the usual Star Trek intrigue in the examination of the Breen culture and all that goes along with it. I also enjoyed seeing some of the other familiar characters executing roles in which we, as readers and fans of the show, might be less used to seeing them, as we are treated to watching Dax captain the Aventine.

All thing considered, in sprite of the the aforementioned issues, it is still a very entertaining read. ( )