Thoroughly enjoyed this short story. I loved Trevor who was a few pounds overweight and pretty hairy. He was not the brightest when it came to dating etc. Not your typical romance hero. The heroine was well written as a 23 year old girl who still lived at home with her parents. She seemed to be not quite sure of herself and where she was going with her life. She made some mistakes on the first date and had realistic reactions afterwards I thought. I'm going to have to get the other 2 episodes which sucks because I didn't mind paying $.99 for 50 pages but $2.99 for the next 70 pages seems pretty steep. And to top it off there's another short episode for a further $2.99. Oh well I'm sucked in now. ( )

Blind date gone right! Loved "Her Teddy Bear" series. Who knew? Your sister can in fact set you up on a blind date with a truly lovable man. Two people searching for love and acceptance who are able to find a way to overcome emotional baggage. Great story told with great humor and a lot of spice. ( )

I LOVE this series.
The guy Trevor isn't your hunky model type with 6 pack abs nope he is your everyday guy.
Trevor is also your typical guy and doesn't want to talk about his feelings.
Naomi on the other hand has valid reason to get upset when she does or at least I think she does because I found myself getting pissed off for her! She actually has to find a way to take the higher road and grow up a bit. There is a lot of hot sex though out the series and a you sucked what moment.
Last book brings it all together. The ending was good and gave me enough closure.


Quotes:

"Pulling out that glorious erection. It was like unwrapping a gift."

"Making him want me and keeping him waiting was fanning my desire some more, and my hot little ladycave was wet and wild"

"Guys always assume we're sweet and delicious and lovely, like fresh peaches down there, but it does take some effort!"

"We could play just-the-tip"

"as I climbed out of my bed, I pulled an inch-long, curly, dark chest hair off my breast. It wasn't attached (thank goodness for that)"

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It is what it is, an erotic short.
From my experience with erotic shorts, this was well written, well edited, well done. I like the author's voice and will seek out her nonerotic works, Or at least check her backlist.

The female protag was annoyingly young in attitude. She is a college graduate who still lives with mom and dad and works a job that is amazingly flexible with things like a morning off to get your hair done.

She has all sorts of internal monologue about the way she should be conducting her life and then promptly forgets what she should do when presented with what she wants to do, as we all do, I guess. She read very immature and a little annoying.

The male protag seems like a nice mature guy who is willing to be himself and engage in whatever activity the female wants to do with him. He does rather rudely shut down their first date conversation at one point telling the female protag that her question (seemingly innocuous) about his marriage was not first date conversation. But 15 minutes later a blow job in the front seat of his truck is perfect first date entertainment. Yeah, I get it, erotic short, such behavior is fully acceptable and encouraged.

I got this as an Amazon Prime loan. I doubt I will read the other two in the grouping. I had enough of those "I need to be a better person" internal dialogues with myself back in the day that I don't want to go there again.
Would I have bought it had it not be lendable, probably not. Strongly dislike and want to discourage serials. I think it is a cute way to unnecessarily inflate prices. If you buy all three it is $3 for less than 150 pages, less than 1.5 hours reading. If this sort of thing doesn't bother you, go for it. It is certainly entertaining and fun.

ETA: my apologies. Volumes 2 and 3 are $2.99 each. $7 for 150 pages or so, not in my book budget. And looking at the backlist, same issue all the way. I wish Ms. Strong luck with that pricing strategy.
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It is what it is, an erotic short.
From my experience with erotic shorts, this was well written, well edited, well done. I like the author's voice and will seek out her nonerotic works, Or at least check her backlist.

The female protag was annoyingly young in attitude. She is a college graduate who still lives with mom and dad and works a job that is amazingly flexible with things like a morning off to get your hair done.

She has all sorts of internal monologue about the way she should be conducting her life and then promptly forgets what she should do when presented with what she wants to do, as we all do, I guess. She read very immature and a little annoying.

The male protag seems like a nice mature guy who is willing to be himself and engage in whatever activity the female wants to do with him. He does rather rudely shut down their first date conversation at one point telling the female protag that her question (seemingly innocuous) about his marriage was not first date conversation. But 15 minutes later a blow job in the front seat of his truck is perfect first date entertainment. Yeah, I get it, erotic short, such behavior is fully acceptable and encouraged.

I got this as an Amazon Prime loan. I doubt I will read the other two in the grouping. I had enough of those "I need to be a better person" internal dialogues with myself back in the day that I don't want to go there again.
Would I have bought it had it not be lendable, probably not. Strongly dislike and want to discourage serials. I think it is a cute way to unnecessarily inflate prices. If you buy all three it is $3 for less than 150 pages, less than 1.5 hours reading. If this sort of thing doesn't bother you, go for it. It is certainly entertaining and fun.

ETA: my apologies. Volumes 2 and 3 are $2.99 each. $7 for 150 pages or so, not in my book budget. And looking at the backlist, same issue all the way. I wish Ms. Strong luck with that pricing strategy.
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