you know the feeling when you're doing something new for the first time? you're scared that you will fuck it up but also kinda anticipating it? this story felt like that.

for a short story to do that... amazing. ( )

Very short, bdsm, thrown straight into a sex scene.

I should have hated this, but I didn't. In fact I loved it just a little bit. ( )

Something about the ending or rather something about Ben in the end didn't quite work for me - 3.5 stars. Adding another half star just because the story was not saturated with sex scenes.
4 stars total :) ( )

Very short, bdsm, thrown straight into a sex scene.

I should have hated this, but I didn't. In fact I loved it just a little bit. ( )

Even though quite short, this story still worked well - jam packed with Jason's emotions bouncing off Ben's cool collectedness. ( )