Mesopotamia was interesting, but unfortunately the romance was not. Kadesh is on the list of love interests I would run away from. "Please don't say no to me?" Ughhhh. I liked Jayden though, and Horeb is nasty. ( )

FORBIDDEN features well drawn, incredibly complex characters and lush worldbuilding. It's a gripping story about choices and consequences in the face of stifling burdens, weighty expectations, and impossible conditions. What I like best about the story is that despite crushing criticism, Jayden grows into her own strength and convictions, choosing a path of her own making instead of settling for someone else's version of her life. ( )

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Quick & Dirty: I enjoyed Forbidden with its rich culture and detail, though the dialogue felt forced and awkward to me.

Opening Sentence: Tonight was the night of my betrothal ceremony.

The Review:

In Forbidden, Jayden has been put in a marriage she does not want. She despises the man she is betrothed to, despite him being a prince and future king of their clan, as they wander the deserts. Then she meets Kadesh. He ignites something in her that Horeb has never done, but they can never work out. As this happens, she is also trying to reclaim her baby sister, stop her sister from joining the temples, and follow her mother’s dying wishes.

The dialogue in this novel felt super forced. The sentences people said didn’t seem realistic, and it wasn’t just because they were in a different time period or country. No, it just sounded weird. That was one of my more major problems with the novel, and it got pretty annoying after awhile. It’s like if I wanted to invite my friend over. I might ask, “want to hang out?” I wouldn’t say something like, “should you have the time later on in the day, you may stop by my humble abode.” It was awkward. It took simple phrases and lengthened them to odd sentence forms. I don’t know if the author was going for the whole old timey Baylonian talk — if so, it backfired. Here’s an example. “It’d be a relief for him, not to have to fend for his daughters, don’t you think?” Couldn’t that have been phrased in a way that flowed smoother? Another smaller thing about the dialogue was that they used different words than we might in today’s society, but that didn’t bother me. “Birthing hole” made me laugh, though.

The culture of the Babylonians and Mesopotamian desert people was one thing that I did enjoy learning about. A lot of it was centered around dancing, and it was fun to see all the rites and ways they celebrated their religion. The whole book there was this problem with Leila wanting to join this temple in a city, where their mother would have forbidden her to go. In this temple the women are basically religious prostitutes that dance for groups of men, who then choose which they’d like to sleep with. It was interesting how they honored their gods, but I can’t say I approved. In their culture, they also have a lot of arranged marriages, which is what Jayden is dealing with, and it was hard to watch as she fought to escape her betrothal to a character whom, frankly, disgusted me. Not in looks, but in personality and actions.

Horeb was one of the sleeziest, most horrible characters I’ve ever had the misfortune to read about. I despised him with a passion. There were many things he did to Jayden that were so wrong, in so many ways: flirting with other girls as well as sleeping with them, attempting to rape her on numerous occasions (which, by the way, Jayden handled well. You go girl! She never gave in.), and “marking” her with a knife as his wife, the way one might brand a cow. He was a disgusting excuse for a human. He had no merits, whatsoever, and his jealousy and lust are his worst attributes as well as his largest. Other characters were better, such as the main character, Jayden. I respected how she handled her love for Kodesh. She didn’t fall in love with him instantly, no. It took months together before they admitted their feelings, which was realistic, and I enjoyed seeing them grow as a couple. She never gave up, though her personality was somewhat cookie-cutter. I also loved her mother, who died very early on in the novel and stayed with Jayden the entire novel. I loved how Jayden continued to look towards her for guidance long after her death.

Altogether, I found this novel an enjoyable interpretation of the Mesopotamian desert and Babylonia. I liked the rich descriptions of culture and enjoyed the slow romance. It was a little long and sometimes dragged, but once you reach a certain point in the book, everything blows up. Jayden is truly left at a horrible place by the end of the book, and I thought it was a standalone until the last page, so I was upset with the ending until I realized there would be another book to wrap everything up nicer. It was dark, intense, and unique. I enjoyed it, despite the awkward dialogue, and felt strongly about certain characters, which proves I was engaged. I’d recommend this to lovers of ancient culture and forbidden romance!

Notable Scene:

My mother’s face grew thoughtful. “There are times, Jayden, when a woman’s emotions run higher and fuller than the waves on the Gulf of Akabah, threatening to drag her to the bottom and drown her.”

“And what does she do to stop it?” I whispered.

“She prays and smiles and greets it with a strong heart.”

“I think I need a lot more practice.”

FTC Advisory: HarperTeen provided me with a copy of Forbidden. No goody bags, sponsorships, “material connections,” or bribes were exchanged for my review. ( )

I won an advanced reader's copy from the author. This in no way affects my opinion of the book.

This book is utterly heart-wrenching... I mean that in a good way! The first few chapters introduce us to the protagonist, Jayden. She is betrothed to her cousin, Horeb and fears that she will never truly love him. She's unsettled by his recent behavior and how much he has changed since they were children. She wants to tell all of this to her mother, but time and unfortunate circumstances get in the way. Once our heart is crushed into tiny pieces we move along and come across a mysterious stranger who is the love interest named Kadesh.

After travelling across the desert with Kadesh her family becomes thankful for his presence. He helped get out of sticky situations along the way and protected them. During the journey Jayden finds that not only is she stronger than she thought, she has experienced something she didn't know was possible. She eventually finds herself falling in love with him and they try to figure out how they will break it to the tribe. With the betrothal upon them time is running out for them to explore their feelings. After I fell in love with the two of them their circumstances changed and Kadesh has to leave, but promises to return. After this, Forbidden turns to more violence, adventure, and sadness. I didn't cry because I was so enthralled by the events that were unfolding at such a fast pace.

There are so many aspects of Forbidden that I love. There was so much more to Forbidden than its descriptions of desert life and romance. Jayden cares about her family more than anything. Her sister, Leila was a constant rock that this book (and Jayden) needed to hold it all together. This book was prefect for me. I would recommend it to anyone who is looking for a fast and drama-filled adventure across the desert and willing to meet a young girl who is willing to put herself at risk for love and family.

The author is also great at foreshadowing. I know something is up with Kadesh- something that he hasn't let slip... yet! The ending left us with a cliff-hanger, so the sequel, for me, is at the top of my list for next year. ( )

Rich in Detail and Drama

(Full disclosure: I received a free ebook for review through the book blog Batch of Books. Trigger warning for rape.)

1759 BC, the deserts of Mesopotamia. Sixteen-year-old Jayden - daughter of Pharez, of the tribe Nephish - is about to perform the betrothal dance before the women of her tribe, sealing her fate as the soon-to-be-wife of Horeb, her adopted cousin and prince in training. Handsome, powerful, and wealthy, Horeb is considered a real catch by many of the young women in this desert-dwelling tribe. Only Jayden sees him for who he truly is - a cold, calculating man, filled with cruelty and sadism. (Perhaps because Horeb only drops his mask for her, delighting in tormenting someone completely lacking in recourse - for when they wed, she will become his property.)

Though their betrothal dates back to their childhoods, there might have been a time when Jayden's father could have renegotiated or even broken it. Originally it was her older sister Leila's marriage to Zenos, the elder of the two brothers, which took precedent. Zenos was first in line to become tribal King upon the death or retirement of his father, Abimelech, and Leila was to rule as his Queen. But all that changed when Zenos died during a raid the previous year - pinning all of her family's hopes on Jayden's thin shoulders.

And while her heart is heavy with doubt and fear, Jayden dances, even as she fantasizes about confiding in her mother Rebekah the next morning. When she awakes, most of the tribe is already packed and en route to its summer lands, the oasis by Tadmur: "the place of weddings and births." It's where Jayden is to be wed to Horeb at the end of the year, and where Rebekah will welcome her newest child into the world. But something is wrong, and the baby is coming early, with only one neighboring family left to help.

(Actually, that's not true; Jayden catches Horeb on his way out, and he brushes her off: "If you want to be married to a tribal chief, you have to get used to doing things on your own.")

Before the day is done, Jayden has buried her mother, as well as one of the two babies growing inside her: a boy named Isaac. With the rest of the tribe long gone - and lone travel across the desert foolish at best - Jayden and her family opt to travel with Shem and his wife and daughters, who are leaving the tribe at Damascus.

Also part of the caravan: a mysterious stranger named Kadesh. Cresting the cliffs just in time to witness Jayden's final heartfelt dance for her freshly buried mother, feverish and sporting a days-old gash in his side, the family decides that he must travel with them - even though it's in the complete opposite direction of where he needs to be. Namely, his uncle's frankincense groves south, near the Red Sea. Though his eventual departure is inevitable, Jayden falls for him hard, their blossoming romance only strengthening her resolve to find a way out of her marriage to Horeb.

The weeks-long journey to Tadmur - where the travelers must battle hunger, thirst, a dwindling herd, raiders, slavers, and rapists - is just the first of many obstacles threatening to undo the young couple. Once they reach the oasis, the danger only grows, as the two are thrust into Horeb's sphere of influence. Backed by generations of custom as well as a tribe full of devoted admirers, Jayden has little hope of asserting her independence and outing Horeb for what he really is - a murderer and a rapist.

(If it seems like I'm dropping major spoilers here, fear not: most of this transpires in the first few chapters. There's plenty more action and plot twists to be found in the 400-page book!)

Forbidden is nothing if not grim. Jayden's world is filled with hardship, disparity, and brutality. Women are treated like chattel, bought and sold by their fathers in exchange for jewels and camels; their very fates decided by the men in their lives. Death is a constant companion, especially during the arduous journeys from place to place, as these desert nomads chase water. Chase life. Life isn't cheap, but rarely will it let you stop to mourn the dead.

Kimberley Griffiths Little tells Jayden's story in rich, evocative prose, bringing the setting to life in vivid detail. Horeb is often in danger of becoming a cartoon villain, but the author does a good enough job of adding depth and complexity to the character. I would have liked to have gotten to know Kadesh a little better - perhaps a little more attention to his character might have made their relationship really spark - but the author's note suggests that this is coming later in the series. At 400 pages, Forbidden is nothing to sniff at. While I largely enjoyed it, I wonder whether Griffiths Little can pull off two more books without losing some steam. As it was, Forbidden skirted the boundary between epic and drawn-out.

Set in Mesopotamia - the area of the Tigris–Euphrates river system, encompassing Iraq, Kuwait, and parts of Syria, Turkey, and Iran - during the First Babylonian Dynasty - Forbidden features a racially and culturally diverse cast. Though Griffiths Little shies away from descriptions of skin color - noting that "researchers still debate what ancient people in Egypt and the Middle East thousands of years ago actually looked like" - her depictions veer toward the dark: dark hair, dark eyes, and occasionally dark skin; e.g., "sun-browned fingers," "the beginnings of a beard showed on his dark skin"; "his features were dark and wild and beautiful all at the same time." Given this, her insistence that "readers can picture the characters however they want to" feels a bit like a cop-out; an invitation to whitewash, if you will. Or maybe I'm just primed to expect whitewashing, given incidents like this and this.

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