Interesting premise, meh execution.

I thought that the official documents interspersed throughout were fun. The characters were undeveloped and as a result difficult to tell apart. I think it would have been better as a short story/novella, as there was a lot of unnecessary filler. The POV was weird. Some characters seemed to know exactly what others were thinking/feeling. I also think that less POVs would have improved the story and made it tighter. ( )