2.5 stars ( )

Major proofreading issues!

Also... Toronto doesn't have police precincts. It should be 32 Division. Just sayin'. ( )

The story is really short, 42 pages but with big characters, so it's actually only few scenes.

Tao is a Canadian detective who is following a serial killer who ran away in Jamaica. When he arrives in Kingston he is assigned a police officer, as a guide and roommate. Ken is an handsome African-American young man, hot like the land in which he lives. In Jamaica homosexuality is not something you can live in the open (is it like so? I didn't know...), and so Ken has devoted himself to a chaste life, until Tao arrives. Ken's gaydar works very well, and he spotted the man as soon as he lands. And so Tao is chasing the killer and Ken is chasing Tao. But their relationship is domed since Tao will soon return in Canada.

It's quite a task to write a thriller in only 40 pages. And actually if not for the end, I was wondering about a scene I read that, in a way, was almost detached from the rest of the story. It's this link between the first part and the last pages that, in a way, justifies all the thriller component of the book. The romance instead is quite simple and easy, Ken likes Tao and Tao likes Ken, so it's not difficult for them to be together. There is a bit of multicultural spicy, both in Ken's look than in his speaking: Remmy Duchene decided to not profit of the usual expedient of the foreign man that perfectly master a second language like a mother tongue speaking; here Ken forgets verbs, mistakes spelling and so on.

A few typos (evidents since the story is not so long) don't weigh so much to ruin a nice story.

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