Daniel Peter Buckley

I won this book from Goodreads and was looking forward to learning a lot. That being said, I put it down a quarter of the way through. Despite it being filled with what I'm sure is good information, it reads like a college student's class notes for the most part starting with the first page. It's filled with run-on sentences as well as incomplete ones. I didn't come across the use of one single comma and multiple words needing capitalization or the correct word were spread throughout. Every sentence begins at the left hand margin. There are no paragraphs because of this, even though there is some spacing where it seems the author tried to show paragraphs. Summing up, it severely needs a lot of editing for me to even try to read it through. It was very disappointing to me.… (mehr)