John Chard

I can't believe this is written by same author who wrote 'After Hours Conference'. It feels like the continuation of that story by an amateur author. Because everything that made the first part great is missing here. There is poor drama, poor buildup and spanking scenes completely lacking any tension.
The most crucial detail the story demanded is missing - why the hell Maggie and Rodger got divorced if they have been so happy with each other, and they are still happy to be with each other. I rated the first part as five stars and listed it among Masterpieces of Femdom Erotica. And be frank, that story had literally ended in first part. Seems like John Chard wanted to cash out his best work in the most pathetic way. I would highly recommend to read first part as standalone story.… (mehr)

From the description this didn't seem a great story. But this is! It's simply marvelous. John Chard has really impressed me with his thoughtful, thorough and creative writing in this book. We don't just watch the two characters of this story in a discipline activity. We see things from their eyes. We feel their feelings. We feel their tension and worries and dilemmas. Contrary to most other stories of this kind, the whole book is focused on a single spanking scene. And then, it's not even about that spanking scene. It's about the drama surrounding the scenario of that spanking action. I love it! I will highly recommend this book to anyone interested in Femdom Erotica.

Note: I've found the second part extremely poor. I will highly recommend reading this part as standalone story. … (mehr)