Max Connelly

Unbelievably awful and by far the worst thing I have read in years.

I don't normally write reviews but it was so bad I felt compelled to comment...

The writing is frequently unintelligible, the plotting all over the place, the storyline ludicrous, the dialogue dreadful...thank God it was only a short story... I assumed it was written (or translated) by someone who is not a native English speaker but judging by the author's name, maybe not?