Mara Frost

I was bored and that was the only reason I finished this. That and the fact that it was super short since it is a serial story. First and I'm harping on the same old thing, jiminy christmas if you don't understand how first person POV view works, please please please don't use it. You can't change from present to past tense in the same sentence. Next it seems as if the author didn't put much thought into the sci fi of it all. It was just a mash up of Star Trek and Star Wars sci fi elements. Then there was not effort to make the aliens alien in any way except they had blue skin. And then there was a bunch of sex that seemed wonky and oddly set up but still so human as to be fairly unbelievable.

It did have some redeeming value in the spunky character of the heroine so that is why it gets 2 stars instead of one.… (mehr)