Sophia Gray

This book desperately needs an editor. One of the characters has THREE name changes in the course of this book. He starts as Darren, inexplicably becomes Dain, then at the end of the book he is Derrick quite briefly, before he is Dain again.. No explanation for the name changes. There are numerous punctuation problems, and at least one instance of the writer using Your when it should have been You're. With an editor for these problems and a good once over for formatting, this could be a worthwhile book. The story itself was good, the editing problems however kept me from truly enjoying it.

I got this book on a free day.

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