Tinker Holmsby

Yes, the premise of the story was a good one, but i am in a party of one when it comes to how i feel about Savannah's Journey. Three things were a distraction. Primarily is the authors propensity for run-on sentences, That in itself was enough. There were also conversations between characters that seemed a bit contrived. Thirdly .....just as i was getting into the storyline it abruptly and ( for me ) confusingly changed characters and locations. Yes it gels eventually but ...sorry to say, in my opinion, .....3 stars.… (mehr)