Darren Hultberg Jr

This book is a lot like similar LitRPGa. Roy Skyworth is brought into another world after meeting his untimely demise on Earth. The written could use some work as all of the characters seemed very flat. The world building was also a bit lacking, and Roy simply lucks out a lot throughout the book.

My biggest complaint however, is how the female characters are presented, all beautiful and highly attractive to the point that Roy falls in love with one with days of arriving. Despite leaving behind a wife and kids on Earth, which doesn't really seem to bother him to much. Roy at times almost comes off more as a horny teenager rather than an adult in a few of these encounters and how he describes the women.

Another minor annoyance is the continuous use of "Roy Boy" it was funny the first time, but after awhile it just became overused and tired.

Now for the best parts. Darren is farily great at writting combat, especially in back and forth battles. The female characters, despite kind of being sexualized in their original descriptions upon introduce are all quite powerful in combat and are shown to more than be able to hold their own.

I was able to enjoy the story, but wouldn't recommend over all.… (mehr)

Okay sequel

Setting aside the many typos I found during read, this book was okay at best. It's short length was what attracted me to it as I was looking for something to read in between long books, however I feel more time spent on exploring conflicts and some of the characters would have done wonders for the over all pacing. One moment a character will be upset at another and within a few short pages everything's peachy again.

Despite this I did enjoy it, but felt book 1 was better written.… (mehr)