Casey Odell

I totally agree with Gunnargrey. Started off really well then fell flat. I almost gave up at the same point, but am bravely striving on, however 2 thirds in, it's not improving.

I really find it hard to get the characters and understand them and they all seem to have split personalities - or its really poor writing - probably the latter. The author give a really strong Impression of a character which at some points I found interesting - but then later the character would do something TOTALLY out of character so it then got really confusing as to what the character was supposed to be like.

It's like someone started the book then perhaps someone else carried on after the half way point and decided to start changing everyone's personalities.?

I hated the main character though she was the worst one, sorry, I have no idea how old she is but acts like biggest spoilt brat ever. One minute she'll be whining, then next she is completely obnoxious and petty and stubborn. She would moan on and on about something then like 2 seconds later suddenly change her opinion and be all whiny again, then soon after that she'd be all moany again, quite frankly she irritated me. And I cannot believe someone who grew up and then worked in a bar would be so naive and not really know anything. I couldn't connect with her and I need to feel some connection to the main character to care, but so far I don't. I'm more interested in her companions.

I gave it a 2 only because there some funny moments i liked,

But at this point in the book there really should be a plot - there isn't one, and its getting tedious and predictable.

I'm going to try and get to the end but all I can say so far is

I'm glad I got it for free -

if you decide to try and give the book a go make sure you get a free copy.

some people may love it. But For me it needs a lot more work and I think could have been much much better. Ie some kind of plot and explanation for things but without it it's meaningless

I would not pay for book 2 if i had to.… (mehr)