Emma South

This was a decent story, but came across as a little inexperienced in the writing...a few missing words, grammatical things, etc. It wasn't enough to make me regret the time I spent reading the book.

The concept was very good. This story could've been out of the park with a little more time and fleshing out of the characters. For example, I never got a clear image in my mind what Jeremy looked like, other than he was tall, good looking, with washboard abs. Same goes for Bea's blonde hair. I'd love to see this written in third person and include Jeremy's POV. I'm also curious about Bea's mother and want to know why Bea was so determined to be independent. Perhaps those reasons will be explained in "Writing Our Song". The story did pick up at the end, giving me a little more drama and angst that I was looking for. I do plan to follow this author as I feel she has tremendous potential.… (mehr)