This story started out really promising. It quickly created a world of which I found myself intrigued. I found myself a bit uneasy, though, because I knew that due to the short length, it probably wouldn't be able to fully develop. And that's what happened here. I felt like the story was starting to develop, but then just abruptly took a turn to allow for it to wrap up in the short format. In the end, it left me more confused than enthralled. ( )

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