This short story seemed very disjointed to me. Not sure if it was some of the editing errors or just the story in general but it felt off. I get that the story only took place over a short amount of time and that time was of the essence but it felt very rushed and convenient. I did like Liam's obvious love for David, however, and did believe his vulnerability and desperation. ( )

3.5 stars. Enjoyed the concept of the story. Very intriguing. ( )