I liked the way the book was going and was interested; however, the book just abruptly ends after a chapter. This seems more like a partial book preview than a book itself.

When I read what is written about this it says the first book. If is is indeed a book I would not read any further. This seems to be following the trend of offering a few chapters, calling it a book and you just have to keep purchasing. I am not interested in waiting either publish a book or don't, but do not dole it out in drizzles, it makes the readers interest wane, because you always have to go back and re-read another couple of previous chapters before getting back into it.

I am going to pass on this in all future incarnations due to this.

Should this not be your pet peeve, the book was interesting and well written up until this point. Original plot and promising characters.