This was okay. I felt like it didn't really bring anything new to the secret baby storyline. One of the things that really dragged it down for me was that the first scene lasted 49 pages. I got very frustrated. You've only got 184 pages to tell your story and you spend 30 percent of it to tell one scene? I kept thinking 'I don't care, move on.' There were several natural stopping points within the scene that were ignored. Plus I guessed early one what was up with the hero's denial of children because I'd read it before. See nothing really new or different. Wasn't horrible or anything though. ( )

Ellie left Morgan when she found out she was pregnant, because he was vehemantly opposed to having children. He tracks her down 18 months later, and thinks she had the baby with another man. So, why was she still single? Then he does the math and realizes the baby is his...and he really DOES want children. ( )