Kim Alan

An abandoned and trained sub finds his needs met by a big dom on Valentine's Day. Everything moved very quickly especially Kyle's surrendering but it's a short story. I would have liked it better if it was longer. Good, clean writing kept this story together.

4.5 stars

Sexy and very, very emotional

I think I would have liked this story much more with just a little bit more meat into the character's backgrounds. I loved Jordan as a character and felt connected to him but Calvin was an ass at times because he had some kind of issues, but we were never told what those issues are. Liked the ending and how they worked through it but I felt this had more of a HFN ending because I don't know if I believe Cal will not get spooked again (by who knows what).

Wow. This little gem packed a punch! For such a short story, I was totally engrossed in the story and loved the characters. I absolutely loved the ending and was pleasantly surprised. Loved this.