N.L. Allen

So I am not giving this book a one because of the story but because of the SERIOUS editing issues involved. I tried to like the story but when you have the same page showing up twice as you try to read the book it gets pretty annoying.. The pages were duplicated throughout the entire book and after you finished reading one you had to find the end of the next one (they were even in two different fonts) in order to get to the next page in the story.

So for what I did read of the story I am going to say that it was interesting and I think I would change my review if the editing issues were fixed and I could actually finish the entire story without having to read each page twice. I am not sure who broke it whether it be Amazon or the author but there are some serious mistakes that need to be fixed before ANYONE should attempt to read this story.

I am so annoyed by this because what I could read, I wanted to read more of and I feel so bad for giving this author 1 stars but it cannot be avoided because something this severe should not make it to someone's Kindle where that someone could potentially have to pay for the mistakes. I normally do not get mad over minor editing mistakes. Hell there are probably three or four in this review alone but I do get angry if the editing causes me the inability to finish what seems like a pretty damn good story line.

If the book gets fixed I will consider changing my review.… (mehr)

*Book source ~ Free on Amazon

Beatrice is out for an early morning walk when she is pulled into some kind of portal taking her someplace she’s never been. She’s drugged, stripped, blindfolded and violated by large hairy monsters.

First off, nowhere in this story are the monsters referred to as Morlocks, so we’ll have to take the author’s word for that. They’re pretty smart for monsters though. A time portal (my guess) as well as drugs? Maybe they ran out of Eloi and used the technology of H.G. Wells to bring nubile women to their time to mercilessly boink. Secondly, I don’t exactly know what time frame this story is set in. It has a feel of historical, but I’m uncertain. In addition, it’s not very well-written. Lastly, I didn’t like Beatrice. She seemed a bit of a twat especially there at the end. All-in-all, forgettable. And I have an urge to watch The Time Machine (circa 1960) since it’s been about 30 yrs since I’ve seen it. Crap! That just made me feel old.… (mehr)