Dove Harbour

This is a very intriguing story. The description grabbed my interest right away, but the story was not long enough to fully flesh out the idea. I think this could be really well developed into a full length book with more development of the characters and a bit more plot to work with.

The concept is good but the execution poor. The characters blended too much for the plot to be as coherent as it should have been. It was just overly confusing.

I think it was also too short. This should have been a much longer book with a bit more character development. Still- a fascinating concept which is why I managed to muddle through it.

cool concept, but too much jumping between characters. It was very difficult to figure out who was speaking..

The concept of the story is very interesting and I felt myself engaged with the struggle these characters were making within themselves. However, it felt as though the story just cut off with no actual resolution outside of "I won". I would love to see a full story of this concept.