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Pretty disappointing after great first and second parts. The idea of pills gaming was good, but intensively slow pacing of the story, and lack of interesting scenes made it very boring to read. You might want to fetch it for reading the ending. But overall, this part does not have much to offer.

I generally like Ann Michelle's story. This one, however, was a disappointment. Although the scenario was good, there were too many logical errors thrown upon early on that made it irritating to read further. Every character seemed to forget everything that happened only few hours ago. And this kept going on and on. I will recommend skipping this one, and read other stories by Ann Michelle, as she as surely written several masterpieces in Femdom Forced Feminization genre.

Ann Michelle is a very good writer of Femdom Forced Feminization Fiction. This story, however, is one of her worst piece of work. First of all, this is not exactly Forced Feminization. Because the main character is already a cross-dresser. Then he also has deep desires to be dominated, and has fantasies of forced into feminization. Hence, there is not exactly tension in this story as there should be. I would recommend you to skip this story and check another work of Ann Michelle, as she has plenty of masterpieces.

Good and actually a very different story compared to all others written in the genre of Femdom Forced Feminization. Strong characterization and buildup, and story flow is good. However, there is lack of enough scenes to describe it as erotica, for which it felt short. But I'm sure many people interested in this genre would enjoy it a lot.

After reading this I'm kind of surprised. I can't believe this is written as joint venture of two of my most favorite authors of Femdom Forced Feminization Eroticas. Even with a huge boring initial passage that lasted one-third of the entire story, it failed completely in building even one of the eight characters. Then, a story written somewhat as horror never for once created a single true thrill. Few erotic scenes of the story were so brief cut-short that they delivered more frustration than fun. Honestly, I would highly recommend everyone, and especially the fans of these two authors, to skip this story. As this would only leave bad impression of these great authors. Rather get good works of them, as they surely have written several masterpieces.

This story started so nicely that I felt this would be one of the best books of Ann Michelle. Max and Debbie's characters and their storyline in the first part was great read. But two things messed it up greatly. The story of Will and Samantha started getting boring soon after it began. Many characters and scenes in that storyline seemed forced. Sometimes that storyline felt more like an irritating interlude to the main storyline of Max and Debbie, but as there were long passages and sometimes full chapters, we couldn't even skim through those.

Second problem with the story was the second part, which was extremely bad. Honestly, if the story had ended with a proper ending at first part, this could still be a good book. In second part everything happening was entirely boring. It was real pain to read most of it, but had to do in order to reach the ending.

Following review contains Spoiler for the first part. So don't read it further if you haven't read first part and intend to read it.


The first part was bad. Story was completely unrealistic mainly because actions and reactions of Catherine and Christopher made no sense. However, at least the character of Sharon had a purpose. In this story, even that purpose is destroyed right in the beginning passage. Hence, everything she did in the first part also became completely unrealistic. Same as first part, the story flow was more irritating than fun. And most of the scenes were not fun to read.

I would recommend avoiding this book. If you haven't read any books of Ann Michelle, she has surely written several Femdom Forced Feminization masterpieces. Grab one of those, instead of this one. As it would only leave a bad impression on you. If you are her fan, even than you should skip this story, as it would make you disappointed, same as it did to me.

Ann Michelle is one of my most favorite authors for Femdom Forced Feminization stories. She surely has some masterpieces in which the forcing someone makes sense. In this story, however, nothing makes sense. All characters actions and reactions are unrealistic completely. Characterization is weak. What's more, the dramatic scenes also don't have same impact as they intend to be delivered. I'm kind of greatly disappointed. I would recommend to skip this book and grab one of the good stories of Ann Michelle, as this would only leave bad impression of a very good author.

It's a good follow up. Diversion of the drama was also fun to read. But then halfway into this part the story kind of lost its momentum, and became somewhat boring. Furthermore, the soft ending and positivity of Megan's character near climax does not feel right for her actions and reactions in the first half of this part. I believe lot could have been done to make it even better than the first part. But that's just my opinion. In the current form I didn't find it even on the same par as of the first part. Nevertheless, it's still kind of satisfactory climax of a good Feminization story.

I love Ann's writings. But in my eyes this book is too overrated. Although the idea of the story is marvelous it's execution is pretty bad. There are too many characters, but except one, none are built properly. There are too many storylines going haphazardly. Maybe the story should have stuck with Melanie as main character and kept everyone else as secondary, and avoid giving detailed scenes to those. In current version, the story seems to be going nowhere satisfactory.

Very overrated story in my eyes. Ann Michelle is great author of Femdom Forced Feminization stories. She has written numerous masterpieces. This one is nothing more than a pretty stretched smut. I would recommend picking up one of the good books of Ann instead of this.

I loved Ann's 'Feminized Fiance' two-part story and decided to try another of her story. I'm happy for my decision. Although the story is entirely different, it is on the same level in in terms of characterization and story build up. It was fun to read. I will recommend this to everyone interested in Femdom / Forced-Feminization.

This is a Femdom Forced Feminization Masterpiece. Not only the best book of Ann Michelle, but also one of the best novels ever written in this genre. Characters are build strongly, and the build-up involves enough tension and twists for an erotica. I will recommended it highly to every reader of this genre.

Second part surely delivers what it promises. And what a great second part of a masterpiece! If you love Femdom Forced-Feminization stories, you must read it.

Really good Forced Feminization story with mild femdom and enough humour. Really enjoyed reading it.

Good follow up to first part. It was fun to read.

Good characterization, good buildup and overall a very good story with plenty of great Femdom Forced Feminization scenes. Ending, however, felt kind of unreal. Nevertheless, I would highly recommend this to anyone interested in this genre.

From the description the premise of the book seems weird and illogical. But trust me, the buildup and character actions and reactions made everything realistic. At times some dialogues felt repetitive. Also, the story so far in the first part has negligible aspects of Femdom. Maybe in second part there would be more. Nevertheless, even this part is pretty fun to read. And at times it's very exciting actually.

My only complain is that the main characters are not build properly early on. Even by the end we know very little about them, like their job and relations with other people, and how the story's actions would impact other important aspects of their lifestyle. How can a man transform himself into a full-time woman if he has to go to work? And what about Megan? Doesn't she has a job either? Because the story never told us if she ever left to work. In a book written with realistic setting such information is crucial.

Nevertheless, it is one of the better books of Ann Michelle. If she delivers the missing key information in the second part, and also keeps the story flow on same par as this one, this might become a MUST READ story for all lovers of this genre.

A good Feminization story with excellent buildup and character actions and reactions. I wouldn't call it a masterpiece. Still, it's one of the very good books of Ann Michelle. Must read if you are interested in Feminization stories.

Although it's not a bad Femdom / Forced-feminization story, compared to the other works of Ann Michelle this one is way below the par. Characterization wasn't bad, and the idea of hypnotism was well executed, so the story was fun to read in first half. However, then the progress became too slow, and boring and unsatisfying as well at various phases. The story actually demanded some darkness tone in second half, but kept repeating similar activities. Ending was same as expected, but even with the slow writing it felt abrupt and was kind of unsatisfying. Should have added another chapter I think that could make it a bit more satisfying. Nevertheless, you can read it if you like the books of Ann Michelle, and would like to see her attempt on Hypnosis on Forced-Feminization.

Ann has written many great Femdom / Forced Feminization stories. Found this one as mediocre though, mainly because of the lack of proper characterization as well as, two plots going altogether, without any reaching proper ending. Nevertheless, you can read it if you like Ann's stories.

Many would agree that Ann Michelle is one of the best authors of Femdom Forced-Feminization stories. She has written plenty of classics and masterpieces of this genre of erotica. What further makes her really impressive, several of her stories are unique take on classic tale. This book is somewhat like one of those.

To be said, it's a simple new female boss feminizing her employee marrying him. But the POV is of another man, who also has a major role to play in the story. And this makes it marvelously, even though the actual story is pretty straight forward. We go along a fun ride.

One thing is surprisingly bad though. And that's the disappointing ending. It was hurried. And the climax made no sense and entirely strayed from realistic, even though the reader would already see it coming halfway in the book. In fact, the illogical ending delivered such frustration that it became anti-climax. Somewhat like Game of Thrones.

Nevertheless, you can read it for the entertaining journey the book delivered.

This story had such a great buildup that in first half I was sure I would be rating it all five stars. Mitch's characterization was handled by means of his thought processing and reactions in most exciting way possible. There was good tension as well as some touch of humor during that buildup. Sadly, the story lost all these positives in the middle, with revelation of Katie's character and intentions. Instead of slow dramatic feminization, everything was rushed. Several useless and/or boring scenes were added solely for lengthening the book. Feeling of 'force' was lost as well, and the ending was simply pathetic. Consider that I'm rating first half as five stars and second half as one, and averaging the whole book as 3. I won't recommend this book highly, but I consider it readable for it's first half.

This second part started off well. But then quickly fell short. Be frank, I'm kind of disappointed. Because the description of this series felt really promising.

Ann Michelle is one of my most favorite authors. She has written several Femdom Forced-Feminization Erotica. Sadly, this book is among her weaker works.

Premise of the book is very common in this genre, and there are hundreds of books written on this subject. For that probably Ann intended to bring forth a different flavor. She failed miserably. This is first part of a three-part story, and this entire book is spent on kind of a build-up of the main story. This is way too big for that. Main problem is in the first half, which is way too dragging and entirely boring. If it wasn't Ann Michelle's book, I would have stopped reading further. Second half is slightly better, but only slightly. And what makes no sense is the infusion of useless characters and non-erotic scenes of Walter at his work.

So far I've read only two parts, and even the second part I haven't found too good. So I'm gonna skip the third I think. I won't recommend this to anyone.