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Stiles loses his virginity to Derek Hale.

This had a very strange tense to it that kept me from getting caught in the fic. Stiles talked about dirty talking, but there really wasn't any dirty talk to make the scene sexy. Stiles talked about knotting, but there wasn't any in depth description of action that made it sexy knotting. It was about talking in Stiles' head about the things that happened without actually feeling or experiencing any of it on the readers part. And the tense, did I mention that? It was, really, really strange. It made everything very distant while trying to make it like the action was happening immediately. It was like being jerked from past to present over and over. I didn't like it at all. The only good thing about the story was it was short so I didn't have to read much. I'm giving 1.5 stars raised to 2 Stars because I can't give half stars.… (mehr)

This is the first installment in what is currently a WIP (as I write this). It is essentially a PWP told from Stiles' POV about losing his virginity to Derek - told with a touch of depth, a dash of humor and some great lines.

This sexy start has put this series on my radar.

They are the type of friends that don't really hang out and on the surface don't have too much in common but underneath are more alike than they are different and have each other's back with no questions asked."

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DNF at 45%

Little more than a PWP. Stiles is itching to get laid and goes to Howl" an exclusive club owned by The Hales. Derek is drawn to Stiles by scent (and attacks him like he is in heat). Derek is OOC in this broody aggressive way in which his sole goal is to get into Stiles's pants and Stiles is OOC and acting like he is in heat as well. Felt no tension between them, which is the best part of Sterek (all that crazy tension!!!).

Stiles might have gotten rubbed the right way in this, but I got rubbed the wrong way and DNF'd in the middle of the bj scene - I was yawning.


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