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I bought the kindle edition when it was on sale for $1.99, and I'm glad I did considering its current price. There is a second book in the works, with a Goodreads entry but nothing on amazon yet. This one ends well, with the setup for book 2 not a huge cliffhanger.

It's very compelling, and only got more intense as I progressed, so that by the time I was tripping over the problems in the next paragraph, I barely slowed down to make notes.

The only real flaw is that the last fight chapters desperately needed a more careful edit: a thing that happens keeps being forgotten. Like... four times. Also, a weapon is there, not there, there. Tsk, editor(s) and author. We are at our most attentive during intense scenes. Edit those carefully.

Anyway, this is really good if you can handle violence and death. Personally, the evil is worse, for me, but YMMV.
 
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terriaminute | Dec 4, 2022 |