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Were there any ways in which the book could have been improved?

I'm not a big fan of Wish - She was okay at the beginning then became more annoying
This book really needed chapters - it was hard to read in these big sections

>2 bhabeck: I agree about lack of chapters!

Add another voice to the lack of chapters. I remember it took me forever to read this the first time since I was still working and didn't have that much free time. I absolutely hated the two imbeciles from IAD. The real life characters would never have been allowed to do the things they did. Not that IAD aren't idiots...they're just more controlled idiots. Their lack of any connection with Harry and anything that was going on would have never even reached a court.

>4 Carol420: Yes I hated that whole IAD part of the story. I just didn’t feel it was needed.

Chapters; shorter text; less jargon.

Chapters!

>6 Sergeirocks: Yes Agree with the jargon, and use of acronyms.

More chapters for sure. I didn't like all the acronyms either.