Meh at best. Toward the end, Edmondson details all the things he wanted to explore in the story, which, being at the end, I read after I read the story. And all I could think was, damn, I want to read that story!

The strained relationship between violent father and bitter daughter was never explored enough (instead, the author chose to keep most of the conversation to "keep your blindfold on!" and "No, we aren't going to Portland to save your mom!"). So, the story lacks the driving motivation for the father's ultimate act.

The art was okay. Nothing super special, but it got the job done.

A lot of wasted potential here. ( )