Should have been the start of a new line

This mostly takes place on the planet with the Arbolian gods. Excellent beginning. I wish this had been labeled as separate from the 29 book series, as this is the perfect opportunity to do a mini-restart on a branch.

If it is possible, I would advise the author to pull this novel and restructure/explain things so that it acts as a new line of its own.

It bogs down a bit during the chase sequence as it is not always clear who is where and with whom.

I would also like to see a little work on paragraph construction. There are times when it seems as if characters are rambling, the paragraphs become so long.

If it seems very critical...I ^really^ liked the plot and characters in this book. It could easily become outstanding.

I have bought and read everything in the Wine of the Gods universe. I will buy whatever comes next.

Truly, this is one of the best in the series in a while. ( )

Should have been the start of a new line

This mostly takes place on the planet with the Arbolian gods. Excellent beginning. I wish this had been labeled as separate from the 29 book series, as this is the perfect opportunity to do a mini-restart on a branch.

If it is possible, I would advise the author to pull this novel and restructure/explain things so that it acts as a new line of its own.

It bogs down a bit during the chase sequence as it is not always clear who is where and with whom.

I would also like to see a little work on paragraph construction. There are times when it seems as if characters are rambling, the paragraphs become so long.

If it seems very critical...I ^really^ liked the plot and characters in this book. It could easily become outstanding.

I have bought and read everything in the Wine of the Gods universe. I will buy whatever comes next.

Truly, this is one of the best in the series in a while. ( )