Emma watches as her neighbors move in. She loves when they come over and introduce themselves. Fun and games come with them.

This story has potential. It is too short for a plot or characters to be developed. It is hot. This does need editing and proofreading as there are typos, grammar errors, and sentence structure problems. There is one area after the men come to her apartment that becomes confusing. I hope she hires an editor and proofreader as I like her writing and look forward to a more polished product. ( )