Bob Avey

I loved the story of the book. It kept my interest from the first page - I was hooked when I reached the line, "Elliot had more levels and layers than anyone Dombrowski had ever met." I pretty much live for characters with layers. The set up might have come a little soon and I was stopped in places by the number of adjectives used. I'd advise the author the SOOO worn out trope, "please show don't tell". I did find the story compelling, and that is something for me when reading a .pdf file. I don't like to read long papers on the computer because I am old and stubborn. I'd love to have this in a paper edition. I was not distracted by the fact that there seem to be others in a series. In fact, I'm anxious to get my hands on another volume in the set. A recommended read.… (mehr)