Melanie Marks

Sure it's swoonworthy but it's also painful to read. First off, Ally is a complete hypocrite. She has already kissed him behind her boyfriend's back so do you really have the moral high ground? And secondly, they both (Aiden and her) cry about it. It was kind of pathetic.

And bloody hell, she is ridiculously judgemental. Half the drama is in her head. He (Griffin) doesn't like her. He's not good for her. He literally keeps asking her out and she shoots him down. It was exhausting. He even asks her to a school dance and he gets his mum to call her when his appendix burst and he's in the hospital and she doesn't even want to go see him, crapping on about how she should stay away and he's no good. Sure she does eventually go and see him but she's a freaking idiot. Griffin deserves better. Someone bloody sane. The ending was way too abrupt, it could've used another chapter to smooth out the edges. 2 stars, without half the drama it could have been 3, but I was just too exhausted. Look it's not all bad, I'm just getting too old to care about teenage angst. It makes me remember all the things I hated about high school. There were some funny lines and there was heaps of fluff. My favourite part was the gummy bears. She chucks a bunch of gummy bears on his car under his windscreen wipers when its cold and dreary and raining and when he puts them on it makes a rainbow. I have no idea if this would work even remotely well but it sounded amusing. … (mehr)

Fall For Me should probably be published as one book. It would make Fall For Me a stronger read, giving it more depth. This was alright, extremely dramatic and full of teenage angst and feelings - and I kind of hated it but I think it's a it's not you it's me scenario - I think I'm getting a bit too old to read this stuff. It made me remember how much I hated that crap in high school.

There were some fluffy flirty bits but there was greater intensity in this one. Massive fights? Mental hospitals? Taking bats to cars? The ending absolutely sucked. WTF?! She totals his car by driving into a tree? It didn't make any sense why he would leave the car - his baby - out for starters and secondly, wtf is wrong with her? It was a completely stupid thing to do. The only thing worse than that was the fact that twice through this book she gets offered non-alcoholic drinks by older men and ACCEPTS THEM? Look, teenagers do stupid things but let's not give them ideas. First off, they were alcoholic, she didn't know these men and she almost gets sexually assaulted because let's face it - older men getting a seventeen year old girl drunk probably aren't going to help her home and make sure she's safe and untouched. She doesn't even seem to realise or understand the significance of what could have been. Either time! It majorly irritated me.

1.5 stars rounded up to 2 and the author should consider putting a note about not accepting drinks from strangers.… (mehr)