Clancy Nacht

I can see this was well written, but it's not my style. A dark urban fantasy, it has too many unanswered questions which I don't like, and the main character Levi seems to be in a state of despair or depression so that whatever Feral does to him is the only light in his world.

Feral never supplies answers about himself and Vic is OK with that and it grates me because I dislike people who hide their secrets so that it's really lies of omission. The relationship also seems to be heading to some sort of tragic ending and Vic seems OK with that too. It may not, but that is how I read it.

This was just too creepy for me.… (mehr)

The Novice Dom was written for the Goodreads M/M Romance Group's 2014 Love Landscapes event.

The author followed the requestor's prompt which is good. The story was also detailed.

I did have a few things that bothered me though. The Dom drank wine before playing. Drinking before or while playing is a no, no. Judgement is hindered if a person drinks, even just a glass, so I didn't like the drinking in the story.

I'm a dialogue person, I like reading conversations between MCs, but this story was almost all monologue and it's hard for a story with monologue to hold my interest for long. But this is of course, personal taste.

The story could have used with a few more contractions instead of, "I have," "he had," etc.

Thanks to the author for taking the time and putting in the effort to write a story for the LL event.… (mehr)